elasticskies.dl
Title; [3/3] don't want no blue eyes; Okay, for the sake of style, I like it. It's such
a good statement some power - it strikes me. I have blue eyes. I like my blue eyes. You're
obviously content without them. The short statement makes one think. Good thing.
User Name; [0/1] elasticskies; nope, don't like it. I never seem to like people's
screen names. I don't even like my own.
First Impression; [5/10] The first thing I noticed was how you seem to be
enemies with capitalization. I'm a big fan myself
of proper grammar, and good punctuation, so, I'm thinking in the back of my head
uneducated...?
Template; [5/5] It's small, but because you're entries are short, it works well.
Likes and Dislikes... Screw likes and dislikes, isn't that covered in anything else? I'm
done with this topic.
Content; [50/57] "is drowning worth
a taste of freedom?" Wow, powerful entry. This
being the first entry I've read, I'm impressed!
"your skin is irridescent; you insist
mine is the same" You sure you're fourteen?
You write better than I do... A lot better. Just without capitals...
"cut out your eyes and float them in a jar
on my dresser" A little morbid?
I like morbid. +100000000 points. Just kidding, I can't do that.
"i have always envied crows, but i would
just be taken for plastic.
" The more I read, the more I want - you're writing is addictive. Addictive. +10points. For
real this time.
Errors; [0/1] I take off a point for your refuse to use capitals...You made a few spelling
mistakes too.
Navigation; [5/5] They work. They exist. They're finable. They're useful.
Favorite Entry; [3/3] "just
snap me already, would you?
" I really like this one because in my mind I actually see the image you described.
It's simply beautiful.
Profile; [5/5] Your Profile
is personalized. I like personalized.
It's informative. Useful. Findable.
Sole Entry; [1/5] Okay, you e-mailed it to me. Uncool. Acceptable. But I'm not gonna
give you points for it. I added it as an
entry.
Linkage; [4/5] Linked on the main template! Special. No button? Ah well.
Total [86/100]
I really enjoyed your diary. I should most defiantly be returning. You're very insightful. You're very poetic. And screw my first impression, I'm giving you those five points back...so 81 to 86...
Reviewed by Pink