mmlove.dl
Note: Sorry about sticking this back here, but they aren't letting non-gold members add entries right now, so instead, I took out the entry that say "we're open" and put you're review here.
User name; [5/5] mmlove…Hah, it makes me smile. I think that's how I feel about love…just mmmm… (100%)
First Impression; [5/5] I absolutely love the picture. It's gorgeous. And orange, good choice on orange. (100%)
Template; [23/25] The picture is gorgeous. I like how everything blends and matches. The orange is pretty against the white background. The navigation is very organized. I love pretty much everything about it. Except the picture might be a little too big and it doesn't fit in 800x600 resolution. But whatever, who cares. At least you warn everyone about that in your little disclaimer message by the navigation. And you made it yourself! (92%)
Likes and Dislikes;[4/4] Likes (+4/2) The template, for sure. The colors in the template. Your use of tags. You're very organized! Dislikes(-2/2) Extra space everywhere, the entry bar should be wider. The organization of your Cast Page. (100%)
Content; [29/34]
Okay, so when I do reviews, I do everything before the Content. That way, I know everything
about your style, and nothing about you when I begin
to read your entries. Maybe that's weird, but reading began with this entry.
Okay, so that was a while ago - I randomly choose an early entry. I like the shortness of the
entry, and how I can feel your excitement,
since I'm still a Junior, I can feel the excitement of the fourth marking period coming up soon,
and the flowers are starting to grow,
and it's like - when the hell is Summer going to hit? (+3)
"I feel like such a fucking crybaby,
seriously." I know the feeling, but sometimes,
a cry, even for a silly reason can be healthy. I mean, we all need to cry sometime. Adios;
I love your use of words not everyone
always uses, it makes things much more interesting. (+2)
This was just dumb. It leaves
everyone thinking what the hell is going on?
Maybe that was your intent, but it's just... pah. uncool. (-2)
"I don't ever remember summer being
so boring." That is a riot. First you're all excited to get out of school, and be a senior,
and now you're like - I'm bored. (+3)
"I'm so glad" .. Okay, you use that
statment too much, it gets dull after a bit. How about, I'm so happy because... This was so
enjoyable!
Glad is such an awkward word as is... (-3)
"I just spent twenty minutes pressing
the refresh button, trying to get into USA Reviews and post the latest review I did." I feel ya
there, we all have
our memories of sitting there pressing the refresh button over and over and over and over... I
love it when I can relate. (+3)
This was just great because at the
beginning your basically saying more or less that April Fools
shouldn't even be a holiday, and about making some comment about it to your friends, and then
you go through all this other ...stuff... and at the
end it's like, oh and by the way, I do have hoilday spirit after all; APRIL FOOLS! (+5)
"I miss my girlfriend." I know it says it
like everywhere, but it seems it didn't set in that
you're either bi or les until I read that. Then I'm finally like, duh, pink, duh, of course...
Okay, you have to get points just for that. (+5)
"...to spare you all from listening to me rant
about how ugly I am..." I had to giggle at that -
is there anyone out there who doesn't think that they are ugly? I mean, seriously. Everyone is
ugly to someone, and everyone is beautiful to someone. So
let's all just get over the fact that we're not perfect. What's even funnier is how you had to slip it
in there, but not talk about it. (+1)
I so know how this goes. When your
sick... Everything is just, blah. And adding an entry about
how your nose is running, or how you can't stop coughing is just not the least bit interesting
seeming when you're in bed with a headache and can't
sleep... Yeah. I don't update while I'm sick either. (Relate points; +5)
Okay, vocabulary wise, I'd say that you're average. You use words that suit things without
getting complex, and you don't go out of your way to
impress anyone. That's just your personality it seems - I don't need to prove anything. I
so like that. (+2)
You use very very little passive voice in your writing, which always makes things more exciting,
so I must salute you on that as well. (+1) (85%)
Errors; [-1/2] A few punctuation errors, and some sentences that are unclear. Nothing insanely bad... I mean, it's not like it's bad as my writing or something. lol. (50%)
Extras; [4/4] Cast Page. Review Page - Great organization! Disclaimer. Bio page. (100%)
Navigation; [5/5] Perfect! No broken links. Nothing is disorganized. The links are relevant, easy to find and use! (100%)
Favorite Entry; [3/3] Oh boy, I read so many, it's hard to choose. Let's just say I like all your entries equally. (100%)
Profile; [2/3] Lots of detail - but I think, almost too much. Most people don't bother to read a whole profile, they just skim to see your interests, you already have a detailed bio page - maybe something witty and short for your profile? (67%)
Sole Entry; [6/6] Very good, very good. Everything covered, good details. (100%)
Linkage; [2/3] Yeah, it's there! I still would have liked a button though... pah, you can't always get what you want. (67%)
Total [89/100]
Well, I liked reading your diary, it wasn't exciting really, but it wasn't like blah, blah
blah... I heard what you were saying, and
it all seemed very suiting for you, and your life. {hugs}