Sole Review
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9:59 a.m. | 2005-04-22
sanetwin.dl

What crazy looks like on a sane day

Title; [4/4] What crazy looks like on a sane day I used the title from your archives page because with each entry, the title is the same as the entry. As for this particular title, I think it’s rather cute. It fits the “theme” of your diary and it of course fits your username.


Username; [5/5] sanetwin. I like your username, also; I found it interesting reading about how you chose that name. Your choice for that name was quite creative and original.


First Impression; [5/5] The first thing I thought was “cutesy” – your template caused that thought. I did some initial skimming of your diary when you first requested and I became anxious to review you.


Template; [9/10] I think the template itself is pretty and I like the little hearts in the background. I like the rhino at the top, but all the white space with it doesn’t thrill me too much. You deserve major credit for designing it yourself, though.


Likes and Dislikes;[4/6]
Likes[3/3] I do like your template; I also enjoy your entries and how you word everything. It keeps reeling me in.
Dislikes[1/3] It seems like there’s a lot going on in your diary; more-so, there’s a lot of things on your main page and it looks a little cluttered. There’s so much to look at.


Content; [23/25] I found myself thoroughly enjoying your entries. I really enjoyed reading about your daughter and your different experiences with her; my sister is due with a girl this summer and it just makes me think about what it’s going to be like when she’s old enough to run around and talk. I saw some of the pictures of your daughter and she’s SO cute!


I noticed that you’re able to talk about your day and not make it boring. Like, it’s day-logging with somewhat interesting details. There seems to be a lot of depth to your writing and the things you put in your diary. You apparently have a lot going on in your life and you express yourself very well. In the process of doing that, you make an attempt to reach out to your readers so that they can relate to what you’re going through.


Errors; [5/5] Nothing that I could see, really.


Navigation; [7/10] Your links are somewhat neatly located near the top and along the side of your template. Like I said earlier, there’s a lot going on with stuff on the side of your entries, so it doesn’t help with organization. But, all the links seemed to work fine. All the extras are nice though because it gives your readers, or occasional visitors to your diary, plenty of things to read and learn about you.


Favorite Entry; [5/5] I really liked this entry. My favorite from this one was the letter to your daughter - very cute.


Profile; [5/5] I like the description you have on your template. If I came across your profile while looking around on diaryland, I’d definitely want to check out your diary.


Sole Entry; [15/15] Your sole entry was written very well; it flowed nicely and was just very, very well-written. I learned a lot about you from it and that’s all that matters.


Linkage; [1/5] You sort of reviewed us; you have the link for your sole entry at the top of your reviews page; then from that page, you have that it’s for sole reviews, but there’s no way to click from your diary to this site.


Total [88/100]



Thank you for requesting. I thoroughly enjoyed reviewing your diary and reading about your life. You’re so open and express yourself nicely. Your diary is well-written and honest. Thank you for sharing your life with such curious people (myself included)!

Reviewed by Jennifer

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